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Monday, February 07, 2005

Grey with scattered snow

Did you know
there are machines that can generate poetry? The lines created by their lifeless ticks and hums might be as meaningful and beautiful as an Eliot or a Frost or a Lawrence or a Kerouac piece, simply because of our very unique ability to contextualize and fantasize.

Did you know,
if you took the first lines of these 5 D.H. Lawrence poems,
1) A Winter's Tale
2) Baby Tortoise
3)Letters from Town: The Almond Tree
4)Under the Oak
5)Last Words to Miriam
and combined them, they'll make another poignant piece open to your very own melancholic interpretation?


Yesterday the fields were only grey with scattered snow

You know what it is to be born alone

You promised to send me some violets. Did you forget?

You, if you were sensible

Yours is the sullen sorrow



Did you know,
you can yell out loud and call your boss a "Baby Tortoise!" without getting into trouble at the annual company retreat?

Yes, you can. Only if you knew poetry, like you knew how to recite this piece from memory ::::

Baby Tortoise
by D.H. Lawrence






You know what it is to be born alone,

Baby tortoise!



The first day to heave your feet little by little from the shell,

Not yet awake,
5And remain lapsed on earth,

Not quite alive.



A tiny, fragile, half-animate bean.



To open your tiny beak-mouth, that looks as if it would never open,

Like some iron door;
10To lift the upper hawk-beak from the lower base

And reach your skinny neck

And take your first bite at some dim bit of herbage,

Alone, small insect,

Tiny bright-eye,
15Slow one.



To take your first solitary bite

And move on your slow, solitary hunt.

Your bright, dark little eye,

Your eye of a dark disturbed night,
20Under its slow lid, tiny baby tortoise,

So indomitable.



No one ever heard you complain.



You draw your head forward, slowly, from your little wimple

And set forward, slow-dragging, on your four-pinned toes,
25Rowing slowly forward.

Whither away, small bird?

Rather like a baby working its limbs,

Except that you make slow, ageless progress

And a baby makes none.


30The touch of sun excites you,

And the long ages, and the lingering chill

Make you pause to yawn,

Opening your impervious mouth,

Suddenly beak-shaped, and very wide, like some suddenly gaping pincers;
35Soft red tongue, and hard thin gums,

Then close the wedge of your little mountain front,

Your face, baby tortoise.



Do you wonder at the world, as slowly you turn your head in its wimple

And look with laconic, black eyes?
40Or is sleep coming over you again,

The non-life?



You are so hard to wake.



Are you able to wonder?

Or is it just your indomitable will and pride of the first life
45Looking round

And slowly pitching itself against the inertia

Which had seemed invincible?



The vast inanimate,

And the fine brilliance of your so tiny eye,
50Challenger.



Nay, tiny shell-bird.

What a huge vast inanimate it is, that you must row against,

What an incalculable inertia.



Challenger,
55Little Ulysses, fore-runner,

No bigger than my thumb-nail,

Buon viaggio.



All animate creation on your shoulder,

Set forth, little Titan, under your battle-shield.
60The ponderous, preponderate,

Inanimate universe;

And you are slowly moving, pioneer, you alone.



How vivid your travelling seems now, in the troubled sunshine,

Stoic, Ulyssean atom;
65Suddenly hasty, reckless, on high toes.



Voiceless little bird,

Resting your head half out of your wimple

In the slow dignity of your eternal pause.

Alone, with no sense of being alone,
70And hence six times more solitary;

Fulfilled of the slow passion of pitching through immemorial ages

Your little round house in the midst of chaos.



Over the garden earth,

Small bird,
75Over the edge of all things.



Traveller,

With your tail tucked a little on one side

Like a gentleman in a long-skirted coat.



All life carried on your shoulder,
80Invincible fore-runner.

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